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In future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying?To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is assumed that in the upcoming generation, everybody will
capable
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 to get even a single piece of news
as well as
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 easy access to read any book,
instead
 of purchasing these materials by spending huge money.
Whereas
, I totally disagree with the phenomenon as I believe that
although
 innovation will get advanced but still human beings, who are comfortable with the physical
appearence
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appearance
 of these
as well as
 people who do not have experience running technical gadgets.
To begin
 with, the first point of disagreement is that people get addicted to the daily newspaper which they read,
while
 having morning tea.
Moreover
, the masses are admiring to maintain a massive collection of printed magazines and published books which they think will be required at any time. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted in ,
Europe
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 it was experienced that the majority of businessmen who are preferring to buy a newspaper as they cut various articles and policy implements from it, which they require in their work.
Thus
, paper print information is much more significant working as a record. Another major point of disaccordation is that operating the internet and understanding its working has not been possible for every individual. People who are not familiar with reading online have not been able to advantage of all these,
due to
this
, their choice of paper news and
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books remain stable and they have not made any who are highly interested in getting day-to-day updates
due to
 homesickness but have lack of technical skills are only preferred to get readily availed things. In conclusion,
it is clear that
 undoubtedly, each and everything is available on the internet
due to
 modernisation but still various factors lead to the unmodification of mass choices. I think printed material has its own benefits which could not be denied.
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