The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the results of
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research
about
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how and how many
people
consume
coffee
or tea in some Australian
cities
. The research was done in the following five
cities
: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
and Hobart.
Overall
, folk prefer to go to a cafe for their drinks in
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most
of
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the
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cities
. The trend
also
shows that individuals most likely would buy an instant
coffee
, rather than a fresh one. Three
cities
(Sydney,
Adelaide
and Hobart) look pretty much the same percentage-wise.
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all of them, more than 60%
people
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visited a cafe to buy a
coffee
or
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tea during the
last
4 weeks. The next liked drink in these
cities
is instant
coffee
, more than 45%
people
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bought it in Sydney and Melbourne, and in
Hobart
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the number is just under 55%. Two other
cities
also
share some
simularities
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similarities
. In both Brisbane and
Adelaide
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less than 35%
individuals
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bought fresh
coffee
thoughout
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throughout
the
last
28 days, and it is the lowest value among all
cities
included in the research. It should be mentioned,
however
, that
Adelaide
is the only city, where
people
prefer instant
coffee
the most; around 50% did it during the
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period.
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