In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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an individual’s
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weight
increase and Use synonyms
health
level reduction are one of the most challenging issues in many parts of the world. Whilst the main cause behind Use synonyms
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unhealthy Correct article usage
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foods
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essay shall look at the main causes of Linking Words
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problem and propose some vital mitigation actions.
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advancement. To illustrate, many Replace the word
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inventions enforce people to have a sedentary Replace the word
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life style
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lifestyle
For instance
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fats
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Another reason for Fix the agreement mistake
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is that boys and girls eat much of Linking Words
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foods
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meals. These junk Replace the word
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contain large oil quantities that increase Use synonyms
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health
problems in some circumstances. To tackle Use synonyms
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other healthy choices to have on the table.
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To sum up
, many factors have led to Linking Words
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an increase
people’s
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weight
and reduce their Use synonyms
health
and fitness levels. Some of these factors are Use synonyms
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practising
sedentary
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a sedentary
life style
and eating unhealthy Correct your spelling
lifestyle
foods
, but Use synonyms
this
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practicing
sports and restricting Change the spelling
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sales. Personally, I ‘m a staunch believer that without public awareness, Change the noun form
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this
issue could not be solved.Linking Words
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