The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The
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illustrates the number of visitors to a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The total number is presented as a sum of tourists who stayed on cruise ships and those who stayed on the island.
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, the total of tourists grew over the observed period.
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, there were some changes in figures for different types of them. Regarding visitors, who prefer to stay on their ships, the
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shows that their amount grew significantly throughout the seven-year period, starting at about a quarter of a
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in 2010 and resulting in 2
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in 2017. There was a slight decrease in 2012, but the
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stabilized the following year, back to the figure for 2011. Meanwhile, the
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for tourists, who stayed on the island during their trips, started at a higher value of 0.75
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, which is threefold greater than one of the first chart. The
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fluctuated throughout the next seven years: there was a slight growth during the first few years,
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some years of stability and a slight dip with stabilizing back
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. In total, the number increased only by 0.75
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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