Some businesses now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in public places. Overall this is a very good idea. To what extent do you agree?

In the past, people used to smoke everywhere without any restrictions, nowadays, smoking has been prohibited in many offices, and in public places by some governments.

This

development represents a significant step for our society and I agree with it.

To begin

with, cigarettes affect negatively our

life

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. Smoking leads to a lot of major diseases,

such

as asthma, cancer, heart attack, and pulmonary diseases.

Therefore

, the number of diseases is increasing considerably

also

for the passive ones.

According to

recent research provided by British scientists, smoke exposure contributes to approximately 41,000 deaths among non-smoking adults and 400 deaths in infants each year. Children who are exposed to smoke are at increased risk for sudden infant death syndrome and acute respiratory infections.

Furthermore

, the government should ban and prohibit smoking in public places, offices, and even near children.

Secondly

, the business of cigarettes brings numerous economic benefits to

companies

and the national economy. Despite the best efforts of the

tobacco

control community, it continues to kill millions of people each year.

Moreover

,

tobacco

companies

need to maintain their position in markets so that they continue to sell their products and

hence

earn profits for their owners.

For instance

, the world’s six largest cigarette manufacturers made profits of more than $55 billion, which is more than the combined profits of Coca-Cola, Nestle, FedEx, and Starbucks.

Thus

, the government should ban

tobacco

companies

which leads to morbidity and death of numerous numbers of people. In conclusion, cigarettes are

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harmful to our society and

tobacco

companies

should be prohibited in the whole world.