Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relatives is traveling to his/her country and say - Describe the relative - Why is he/she traveling there? - Why do you think they should meet?

Dear Pooja, Hope you are doing well and in good health. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my cousin who is travelling to Hongkong for work purposes. It would be great if both of you can spend some time together during her stay. My little sister is working with DBS Bank as a compliance officer and needs to visit Hongkong branch in Kowloon next month. She is a very social and fun-loving person. I have already spoken to her and she is looking forward to meeting you.

Firstly

, she will land early morning and will directly head to her hotel where she has scheduled her meetings. Despite her hectic schedule, she would love to meet you and pass you some home-cooked food.

In addition

, if you need anything from here she can carry it for you too. As her meetings will end in the early evening, both of you can catch up for dinner. Since her hotel is very near to your place, I believe it would be quite convenient for you to meet up too. Let me know your plans so that I can coordinate with you and my sister

accordingly

. Best regards, Nur Amirah

Submitted by prasu.kuchipudi on Sat Apr 22 2023

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7 paragraphs

199 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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