You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter 1 Describe the problem with the equipment 2 Explain how this problem is affecting your work 3 Say what you want the shop or company to do

My name is Madhur Bathla. I am writing
this
letter with reference to the laptop I purchased from your shop
last
week. I have been consistently facing the challenge of heating issues since the day I purchased the laptop from your shop.
Moreover
, the problem is so severe that I cannot place it on my lap as it generates too much heat which is impossible to tolerate by human skin.
Due to
the heating ,
,
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problem
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the computer restarts every two hours, automatically.
Furthermore
,I miss important takeaways
while
in a meeting with my teammates because the computer shut downs
while
I am still working. I would request you to send a technician to visit my place and find the root cause of the problem with the machine
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and fix that immediately. Or, please consider an exchange request to pick up
this
one and deliver a new machine. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Madhur Bathla
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