A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Success has always been one of the most vital achievements for human beings.
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the years,
variety
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of different meanings appeared for
this
phenomenon and some
people
claim that
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success is measurable by
money
. In
this
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I intend to delve into
this
topic and eventually
to
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express my opinion. On the one hand, it is undoubtedly the case that
money
are
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impactful tool
this days
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. If a person
suffer
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from poverty,
it
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is seen as weak, incapable of dealing with the pace of
todays
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world and even unwise.
Therefore
, most
of
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the
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individuals exalt wealth as the highest value.
Moreover
, some are willing to abandon their families and friends at the expense of financial
well being
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.
For instance
, in
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recent years has
became
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common for married couples to not have a child
due to
their busy schedule and work responses.
Also
,
money
enables
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people
to enjoy numerous pleasures, which are unavailable for the poor,
such
as luxury vehicles,
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around the world, huge homes, etc. On the other side of the argument, I firmly believe that there are far more crucial things in life than
money
even in
this
consumerist time.
Firstly
, health is essential to
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people
and actually, without
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is impossible to achieve anything else.
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if a person is rich but ill his, property will lose its value because its owner cannot spend his
money
knowing that his life is in danger.
Secondly
, I feel that family is
above all
and any
money
will not buy anyone the warmth and support that loved ones give. The best feeling for anyone is to feel loved and to know that whatever happens his family is behind you. To put it in the nutshell, I pen down saying that
money
is needed, but
people
should be aware that with them they cannot buy happiness.
This
means
thah
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that
there are other meaningful things in our short life, and
money
must not blind us.
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