The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Australia in 2010 and 2015.
The pie charts illustrate the online
sales
of various essential shopping items
in Australia between the years 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, throughout the years most items
purchased online are electric and appliance, closely followed by food & beverage and home furnishing which gain a similar percentage. Meanwhile, a considerable number of units sold on gift items
and books, while
a notable decrease in video game sales
after a 5-year period.
In 2010, 27% of items
sold online goes to electric & appliance, rising to 33% by 2015. Trailing behind the drink and food sector and home furnishing sector, where both years shared one-fifth sales
of the total proportion.
On one hand, a different trend can be observed in the sales
of video games online with approximately 19% sales
in 2010, while
experiencing a sizable drop (about 8%) after a half-decade. On the other hand
, an opposite trend happened in the online sales
for gift items
and books from 7% and 4% in 2010, increasing to 11% and 7%, respectively.Submitted by lsc_00000 on
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