The map illustrates the devlopment of Youngsville in New Zealand over a quarter of a century period,starting from 1980;while the picture indicates differences between a cinema in 1980 and itself now.

The map illustrates the devlopment of Youngsville in New Zealand over a quarter of a century period,starting from 1980;while the picture indicates differences between a cinema in 1980 and itself now.
To begin
, the maps illustrate the changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over 25 years from 1980 to 2005.
Overall
, when compared to 1980, few factories, a warehouse and a stadium can be observed after 25 years. First and foremost, within a quarter century, the area was turned into an industrialized zone with no regular houses
while
replacing them with modern skyscrapers.
Furthermore
, the number of trees had been reduced as well. The location of the railway station, the airport, the warehouse and the hospital remained the same.
Moreover
, the woodland area near the airport was turned into two factories
while
the railway road was developed
further
both ways. In 2005, two new parting slots had been added to the northern part of the village compared to 1980 when only one parking space was available near the airport.
Additionally
, in 2005, a park can be seen near the lake and the stadium even though it was not there for 25 years. There is a marine in 2005 near the railway station and it was not available before a quarter century.
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