The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150 words.

The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before

and after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150

words.
To begin
, the map illustrates the changes that took place in a
library
over five
years
of time. The location of the entrance, the stairs and the librarian's desk remained the same.
Firstly
, the number and the arrangement of the tables were reduced after 5
years
.
Also
,
initially
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,initially
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there were 6 single tables and after 5
years
, those were replaced by four long tables with more space.
Furthermore
, the place allocated for films and DVDs used to be the designated area for newspapers and periodicals 5
years
earlier.
Moreover
, two newly added computers can be seen in the more recent picture
while
the
library
had no computers before.
Additionally
, four new sections were added apart from history and self-help to the left part of the
library
whereas
the upper part was allocated for children's books by replacing fiction after 5
years
. The newspapers and periodicals were no longer in the
library
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • modernize
  • technological facilities
  • computer stations
  • digital book borrowing
  • interactive learning
  • family-friendly spaces
  • cafe or lounge area
  • social interaction
  • open spaces
  • flexible seating arrangements
  • collaborative work
  • community events
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