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The developement of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvanges to having one having one language in the world

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Nowadays, English is becoming the most commonly spoken
language
 globally. An increase in
the
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tourism is in
one
 way or the other, contributing
for
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English to becoming a common medium. If English becomes the only prominent lingo across the globe, there are a few advantages and disadvantages to it, which will be discussed in
this
 essay. The main advantage of
one
 common
language
 is that communication becomes easier between nations and
people
.
This
 will help in economic growth, transfer of technologies and information,exchange of trade and commerce and negotiations between countries.It
also
 aids in
learning
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 and
transfer
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 of ideas among
people
.
In addition
 to that,
people
 from different corners of the world may be in touch with each other without any difficulty
of
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or
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 misunderstandings.
For instance
, a person, who studied in
one
 place can go and work in any other place without facing any
language
 barrier.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 a few disadvantages to having
one
 common
language
.
Firstly
, the vernacular or local dialects may disappear eventually
along with
 their cultures. Having diverse cultures and traditions is what makes
this
 world interesting.
Also
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 many scriptures that are treasure houses for abundant information are in different mother tongues which may get extinct as a side effect.
Secondly
, it may cause a threat to tourism because
people
 usually travel to explore different customs and lifestyles.
Therefore
, with a common
language
,
this
 diversity may reduce gradually leading to a lack of interest in tourism.
To conclude
, though having a single common
language
 reduces the barriers between
people
 and nations communicating with each other, it
also
 eventually destroys the varied cultures that are linked to diversified dialects.
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