In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often suggested that it will be more difficult to live on the globe in
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days, and some individuals believe that finding an alternative planet for living and consuming more money to do it is needed. I strongly disagree with
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view because there are too many resources that are waiting for
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and the
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of other planets’ vital signs
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still limited. The exploration of new sources of the Earth is crucial.
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some
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the vast majority of reserves are depleting.
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, there are still new resources which might help to survive all the people on the globe
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as natural gas sources in the seas.
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, the governments
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have a policy that spending
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amount of money from the budget to invest
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new findings in terms of
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sustainable living conditions to coming generations. In Turkey, recent news
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shown that the
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is so close to
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new natural gas
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Sea after a few processes which
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significant finding for Turkey
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the European countries
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The scientists
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are still wondering that the other planet’s sign of vitality and
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have been
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by the developed nations. Unfortunately, there are still some doubts
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is there a
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or not.
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,
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some may predict that keep living on
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Earth will be impossible and need to look
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other
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planet, I tend to believe
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imposible
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impossible
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proof. As an example, Elon Musk’s company, SpaceX, have been searching for
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evidence of
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for many years,
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, there is no current
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about it by the company. In conclusion, I totally
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disagree
that human-being need to explore
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another planet
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to live without any proof, and
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we have to be aware of our reserves which are still there.
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