The graph line shows radio and television audience throughout the day in 1992.

The

line

chart illustrates some information on the audience of

radio

and television all day long/ in a

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period in 1992.

Overall

, it is obvious that

radio

audience

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audiences

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have a lowest point after night time and

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highest point during the morning.

As well as

television

line

shows that it has two essential time

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increases

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during

evening

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the evening

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and the main lower percentage in the early day.

According to

radio

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line

the percentage of

audience

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is

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increased between 7.00 and 9.00 which is the highest mark

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radio

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the radio

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line

however

in

this

graph there is another secondary higher point (approximately 15%) from 15:00 to 17:00.

By contrast

,

due to

the chart two decreasing time exist. With regard to the

TV

, at 1 am. there were under 10% people watching

TV

.

As well as

nearly at 11 am approximately 4 percentage of people is watching

TV

. There were gradual/ steady increase in people watching

TV

at 13 a.m afterwards,

this

figure was peaking at nearing 45% at about 9 pm.

By contrast

,

at the end

of the day, there was a considerable drop in viewer circa 20%.