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The plans below the site of an airport mow and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps provided illustrate the possible transformation of Southwest
Airport
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 from now to next year.
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, during
this
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 1-year span, the
airport
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 will have experienced an enormous change, developing into an 18-gate
airport
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 over the period and adding new facilities. To be specific, the check-in counter in the departure hall will be moved to the middle of the building,
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 the original location being replaced by a luggage drop area. The future plan shows shops standing after exiting the security passport control in the departure hall. There will be new exits, cafes and ATM machines in the arrival hall, with expanding areas for car hiring services. The major change in the
airport
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 will be the number of boarding
gates
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, increasing from 8
gates
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 to 18
gates
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. The
gates
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 will be distributed into a Y-branch and there will be 9
gates
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 each on one side. The location of security passport control and passport control customs will remain untouched.
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