Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

These days more and more citizens opted to buy their daily
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groceries
from huge supermarkets than closer local shops.
This
is basically
due to
deals, customer services and
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the convinence
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convinence
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convenience
they experience rather than from local grocery
stores
. And, in
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to
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this
development
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oftenly
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often
mentioning
this
will be a positive trend over a negative aspect. On one hand, people do prefer to shop
their
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daily essentials from these huge
stores
with the main reasons of
easy
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and
convinent
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convenient
. Supermarket owners nowadays, establish new branches in each and every town or village in the country to give quick access
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their
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clients
.
Furthermore
, they
stores
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with
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countless amounts of products,
subsequently
, customers do not experience a hard time
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searching
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product
what
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they prefer.
On the other hand
,
this
will affect the local firms
along with
the community. By
prefering
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preferring
to shop from
huge
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the huge
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firm
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firms
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and most small grocery
stores
will have a hard time to
acheive
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achieve
a sale, which
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some point
of
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not
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a sale at all. These may cause some
families
in the community
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For instance
, some
families
with operating local groceries from
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to
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generation
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. In my opinion, supermarkets will be a benefit for the community, as they will help to arrange more employment
opportunites
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opportunities
for the younger crowds and some simple
families
locally.
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will affect
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those
families
with
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from their elders to continue over the decades,
however
, these
families
tend to give bad
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experiences
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for
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customers as they have no intention to build or operate the business as they
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to do by
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their elders
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