some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

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that the loss of singular types of fauna and flora components is the major environmental issue nowadays,

while

others claim that there are divergent aspects which are more harmful to the

world

instead

. I do believe that the

trash

pollution

faced in big cities can be more environmentally dangerous. On the one ,hand some advocate that the death of particular types of plants and animals presents in nature can lead to

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extinction of these species, as

this

problem not only decimates several lives but

also

impossibilities their regeneration. As a

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consequence all the

world

's lives will be affected in huge proportions.

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massive deforestation the soil is affected worsening the greenhouse effect and jeopardizing the quality of plants and water, which will certainly harm directly all the animal's health around the

world

.

On the other hand

, others refute

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idea and affirm that there are more paramount issues to be considered when it comes to environmental problems for example

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because all

this

trash

that, sometimes is thrown in streets will achieve oceans.

Consequently

,

this

issue can cause a myriad of marine species death which can enable starvation for those who are dependent

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sea animals for sail or food.

For example

, people who usually eat and sell fish will suffer dramatically from the lack of food and financial supply

such

as the marine life caused by

trash

pollution

.

To conclude

, even the loss of animal and plant species can put the

world

in a dangerous situation, I hold my stance that the

trash

pollution

faced by metropolis in most part of cases can be more harmful

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the environment. Ideally, the government should implement more politicians or advertisements in order to raise individuals' awareness about ecological protection.