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You sent some documents by post recently, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter -Give details of the situation -Describe the documents -Say what action you want tobe taken.

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Dear Miss Blanc, I am writing to you as my client reports didn't arrive
to
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 your office during the weekdays. As I work from home, I moved to my sister's house in New York for a
while
, that's
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way
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why
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 I
could't
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couldn't
 bring those documents. There are 59 pages of
clients
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report
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 and 10 pages of financial reports. I need your signature before
end
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 of the year
however
, I posted them 3 days ago and they are still in
transportation
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 process
and
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apply
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I am not sure when you could take them, probably shipping is slower because of
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new year's
eve
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 is coming. It was a
succesful
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successful
 year
to
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 me. I sold
105 holiday
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 packs in the
last
 quarter and all the
customers
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 detailed
informations
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,
complains
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 or thanks are in the file in
a
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historical order. If you accept, I could mail you and you can print and sign
on
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it. I need signatures,
each
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pages
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 of
sales
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 report and 1 sign
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from
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the client's
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client's
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clients
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. Yours
faiithfully
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faithfully
, Elif Beyza Önder.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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