oPeople nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

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people
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to earn money rather than to have
an
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abundant sleep in the 21st century compared to the past.
This
essay analyses why
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a
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good sleep is required in life to succeed than having short
tern
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happiness.
To begin
with, it could be argued that for a better lifestyle and to get socially connected you need to spend more and more of your precious
time
. In
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, living creatures
upon
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this
planet has started working beyond their given
time
just to earn some handsome amount of penny.
Moreover
,
huge
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number of youth their most of
the
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time
in
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social media just to check each other’s
day to day
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in their life which causes sleepless
night
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.
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,
in
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a recent statistical report by Cambridge
university
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on
sleeping
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cycle of humans indicates that after vast development of social media and its feature
which
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encourage
people
to spare more
time
on it which is the only reason for cutting down the sleep. Having said that,
this
could
effect
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individuals in their daily routine
by
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different ways
like
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the first and foremost is sleep. If
,
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a person doesn’t take enough rest within a day
then
it might be a downfall in their present career
as well as
in future. Alongside,
this
also
subsides creativity which is truly essential for their career ladder.
Additionally
, sleepless
nights’
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effects
in
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tiredness and aggressive
behavior
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behaviour
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towards other
people
around us. In fact, we can’t spend some
time
with our family members
due to
hectic schedules or surfing social media which generates
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between them.
This
could be exemplified by
latest
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article by
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the time
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time
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of Canada states that
people
who
takes
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less sleep are barely successful in their life
than
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compared to one
which
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takes sufficient sleep.
To conclude
, it is highly recommended to take
adequate
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amount of sleep for their betterment rather than working more for just some cents which results in declining
of
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creativity, concentration and many more.
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