The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The graph shows female
unemployment
rates in four countries of the United Kingdom (England, Wales, Scotland
, and Northern Ireland) for the years 2013 and 2014.
In 2013, the highest unemployment
rate
for women was in England at 6.8%. This
rate
went down to 6.5% in 2014. In Wales, the rate
was 5.4% in 2013, but it decreased to 5.0% in 2014.
Scotland
had a female unemployment
rate
of 6.1% in 2013, but this
increased to 6.7% in 2014. Northern Ireland had a rate
of 5.6% in 2013, which dropped to 4.6% in 2014, making it the lowest rate
among the four countries.
Overall
, while
England and Scotland
had higher unemployment
rates, most regions saw a decrease in 2014, except for Scotland
, where the rate
increased.Submitted by dnm.best on
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