The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The number of
books
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that were borrowed in 4 various months in 2014 from four
village
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libraries is demonstrated in the line graph
and
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the proportion of
books
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, by type, that were taken over
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period is indicated in the pie chart.
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,
it is clear that
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every library of the
village
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had different patterns of
books
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borrowed over four months, and that each given genre had
different
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a different
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value of the number of
books
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borrowed. As regards the
first,
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Sutton Wood
village
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experienced wild fluctuations from June to September, where the trend was upward, rising from 250 to three hundred borrowed
books
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,
whereas
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Church Mount had a steady increase, changing from fifty to 150 in 2014. In comparison, in Ryeslip
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village
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village,
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the number of
books
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taken from the library was steadily reduced from three hundred to 175
books
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in four months.
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, in West Eaton’s
library
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the variable gradually grew and
then
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leveled
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levelled
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off after August, having the same change as in Ryeslip
village
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.
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, the information from
pie
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the pie
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chart demonstrates that
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the self-help
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genre was the least borrowed book type,
while
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fiction
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were the most popular among people in 2014, being ten per cent and 43 per cent respectively. Both history and science
books
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were equal to fourteen per cent, which is almost
one third
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one-third
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of fiction
books
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.
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, biography had a value of 19%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rates
  • female unemployment
  • data representation
  • overall trend
  • disparities
  • regional differences
  • insight
  • analysis
  • significant changes
  • employment policies
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