Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home, say why you would like to do this work and explain when you will and will be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Heena Chadda. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am ready for your help next summer. I have read your announcement on Facebook, and I think I can give a helping hand. Let me describe the things that I can perform. Regarding the outdoor activities, I can clean your garden, and feed your pet if you have any, and I can water the plants every day. For the indoor activities, I can do better cooking for you, your laundry, and cleaning the house.

However

, I am not helpful when it comes to driving as I never learned to drive at all. I use public transport every day. I have been helping needy people for a long time. I really feel satisfied helping them not even in my locality but across the nation. I will be available three days a week from 9:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. I can start from next week. So, please let me know if

this

is convenient for you. Waiting for your reply. Best Regards, Heena Chadda

Submitted by heenachadda1 on Mon Apr 24 2023

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