There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I am writing this
letter to express my position. That is
to say that the bus service in our area is not good. In other words
, they have many disadvantages . There are no cameras on the buses
if someone steals some kind of thing. That is
why, there will be many robberies on the bus. This
causes people to be dissatisfied with buses
. In addition
, these days buses
do not arrive on time, causing people to arrive late to their places in a hurry . Such
problems are affecting not only me but also
others. This
is the reason, I'm late to work every day . After that, my boss gives me a punishment . That is
why, I ask that the buses
arrive on time. Moreover
,I would feel safe if cameras were installed on buses
.
I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction.
If you need any other details please feel free to write to me.
I would certainly be interested in hearing from you as soon as possible.
Thank you for your time and consideration .
Yours faithfully,
Joziba Maxmasoliyeva.Submitted by asqar4997 on
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- although
- even though
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