The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The line chart illustrates the
visitors
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' preference when they have a tour of the Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the total count of
visitors
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has increased significantly. At
first,
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visitors
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prefer to stay on the
island
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and are replaced as the more popular place by staying on cruise ships, which grow marginally
at the end
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of the period. In 2011, the number of people who were willing to stay on cruise ships rise sharply at the number of 0.5
million
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visitors
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but plummet to 0.3
million
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in the next year, which is only over one-fifth of
visitors
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who want
island
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tourism. In the following five years, the cruise trip population rise steadily and surpass the other in the middle of 2015. When it comes to the
visitors
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who love to wander on the
island
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, it slightly increases to 1.5
million
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in 2013 and
then
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remains level until 2015.
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, in 2016 a little bit fell to 1.3
million
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, but eventually back to the previous figure.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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