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Crime rate has increase with the advancement of technology. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.

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First of all, technological development is the most important tool in
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 many citizens use electronic tools in their life some scientists and psychologists hold the view that reducing consume web site is vital nowadays . I believe that without the
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 or social news many services will stop and many aspects of society will suffer from commercial issues . on the one hand , despite disagreeing that social
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, some advocates believe that life without technological tools is more comfortable and safe .
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, many crimes nowadays are connected to social
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, opponents and I are convinced that if
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 even marketing glossaries.
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, if government prevent communication through electronic programs many students will not complete their study because all documents are shared by social
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 age is the digital age and there is no institution preventing development in the technological field . In conclusion,
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 but it is not the major cause to do crimes . I believe that increasing stealing is connected with economical issues not technological reasons
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