Some cities create housing areas by providing taller building. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?
These days, we can easily find taller buildings which are called
apartments
. Also
, we see some houses between height buildings. According to
people
's preferences and decresed
populations, housing will be more appropriate in the changes of society.
Correct your spelling
decreased
To begin
with apartments
, for example
in Korea, a
land is too small to live many populations, so to utilize Correct article usage
the
lands
properly, there are many tall buildings Fix the agreement mistake
land
expecially
in Correct your spelling
especially
cities
of Korea, Seoul. In the Correct article usage
the cities
apartments
, not only many people
can live but also
people
can use small lands more effectively. In recent apartments
, there are community facilities such
as swimming pool
, playgrounds and gyms. Fix the agreement mistake
pools
Also
, security services are well. Nevertheless
of these advantages, nowadays, people
think that private is the most important factor. However
, in the apartments
, it is hard to live in private and sometimes the noisy
from other floors can cause crimes between Replace the word
noise
neighbors
.
Change the spelling
neighbours
In contrast
, house with a large area, people
can use it privately. They can decorate their spaces what they want to. Also
, through big gardens or spaces, they can feel relax
rather than in the apartment. Change the form of the verb
relaxed
In addition
, people
do not need to care of
making noise. So, if there are children, they can run or do activities freely in their homes. Change preposition
about
Although
there are many advantages, there are also
disadvantages such
as lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
security
system or Correct article usage
a security
less
opportunities Change the quantifier
fewer
of
connection between Change preposition
for
neighborhoods
. But, Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
It is clear that
pros can overcome cons.
In conclusion, there is a consideration between
which is better, Change preposition
about
apartments
or houses. There are many views of benefits
and non-benefits of both ones. Correct article usage
the benefits
According to
decreasing population and increasing on
Change preposition
apply
the
importance of privacy, I think houses are a Correct article usage
apply
more
better solution Change the word
apply
to
society.Change preposition
for
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