Although more and more people read newspapers on the internet, newspaper will remain as the most important source of news. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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on to
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the internet
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and
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the papers online, newspapers will be more essential for
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the population
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to be informed
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news
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the news
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. I agree with
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opinion and think
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kind of way is valuable for them.
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, we do not know
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of the messages on
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social network are reliable, as some of them have the author, but much more of them were probably written on purpose to arise panic or
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shock.
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to
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, the information
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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, no doubt, has
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a source
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and it is checked by
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the editor-in-chief
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.
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, a lot of publishing houses are popular in our country
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''. Because it is safe
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the news on TV or radio.
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, when we log on to
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the internet
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for hours
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to
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papers, it may damage our eyes.
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,
paper
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the paper
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version is made from
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product which does not get tired eyes, it is one of the
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side
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of
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. Namely, some adults
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as our grandparents are possibly unable to read
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sentences on
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mobile phones,
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, they are interested in social media and they can read
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easily
at
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the
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paper.
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, they prefer
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it.
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, some people like the speed of social
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networks
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due to
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newspaper
delivering
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is
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being
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more slowly than
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others
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.
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But in my view, it is good
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to take true data. In conclusion, I believe that reading newspapers will be more comfortable and useful to our health than
to read
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it
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them
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online.
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