Some people think governments are responsible for peoples health, others believe its an indiviuduals responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One
of the social concerns today relates to
health
.
While
it is commonly suggested that
governments
are responsible for
people
’s
health
, others believe its an individual’s responsibility. In my opinion, the
health
is very important and no everything can replace. On the
one
hand, it is argued by some that
people
need protection about
health
for
governments
.
Firstly
,
people
must pay money for
governments
every month.
One
good illustration of
this
is
governments
have update about facility
such
as: the park, supermarket, the places help
people
feel ralax,...
Secondly
, only
governments
can be decice promulgate law.
For example
, when
people
want to build sports yard
then
they must be allow of
governments
.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others that each
people
must take care of in my body.
People
often have
this
opinion because each
people
have life difference so no
one
could responsible to protect
health
of self. A particularly good example here is we can be take care of yourself by eat, drink, do exercise,… every day I always eat very much but important it is good for my body, I alway set time for me to do exercise every week
such
as: boxing, play soccer, swimming, go to walk,… because it help me update my body as my life will happy and healthy better. In conclusion,
governments
are responsible for
people
’s
health
, others believe its an individual’s responsibility. Personally, I tend to believe that we can understand role important of
health
, how is it? And we will know to protect it.
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