The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The line
chart
presents the number of reasons why adult Use synonyms
people
decide to Use synonyms
study
. The second pie Use synonyms
chart
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illustrate
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illustrates
that
their opinion on how the fee of
adults course should be distributed.
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Overall
, it is evident that the main reason for Linking Words
study
among adults is interest in Use synonyms
subject
and the greatest proportion of Add an article
the subject
cost
of Add an article
the cost
study
must be borne by Use synonyms
individual
and the least must be taxpayer Correct article usage
the individual
according to
adults’ opinion.
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According to
the first Linking Words
chart
, 40 Use synonyms
percentage
of adults mainly go to Replace the word
percent
study
for interest in Use synonyms
subject
and Correct article usage
a subject
also
the second reason Linking Words
due to
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chart
is gain qualifications (38 %). Some of them choose to Correct article usage
the chart
enroll
to enjoy learning (20%). A similar percentage was noted to improve prospects of promotion. By a small margin, 22 Change the spelling
enrol
percentage
of them is preferred to Replace the word
per cent
study
for Use synonyms
helpful
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in
current
job by adult Add an article
the current
a current
people
. Meeting Use synonyms
people
(9 %) and being able to change jobs (12%) are less likely to Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
be reasons
reasons
to continue their education.
Regarding the cost of the courses, it is obvious that 40 Wrong verb form
reason
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
course
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the course
fee
should be paid by Fix the agreement mistake
fees
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the individual
individual
and 35 Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
percent
should be supported by employers. Change the spelling
per cent
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the
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pie
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the pie
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, 25%,Use synonyms
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people
think that taxpayers ought to pay the cost of the adult Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, people, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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