The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000
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The first table illustrates some data on the total value and below the three pie diagram presents the different percentages of three counties (Canada, china and other countries) of fish imported to the US from 1988 to 2000.
Overall
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, it is obvious that in 2000 total value increased
as well as
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from China to the US fish importing is highly grew.
However
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, in 1988 the total price decreased. The first graph presents that the lower value belongs to the year 1988 (6.57 billion) and in 1992 it rose a little( $8.52 billion).
Nevertheless
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,
this
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mark reached $10.72 billion in 2000. The second pie charts show that in 1988, Canada supplied the overwhelming majority of fish importation
nevertheless
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in 1992, the importation of product reduced to 34% from Canada compared to 1988 and it proceed to fall to 28% in 2000. Other countries’ importation is 27%
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it is highly increased (46%) in 1992.
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,
according to
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the figure it again slightly goes down to 42%.
On the other hand
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, China’s imports rose over the period to reach 30% in 2000.
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