These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Nowadays,
teachers
are
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crucial importance in our entity, but most
the
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individuals would rather become, especially in junior high school.
This
essay will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the issue is that
teachers
’ salaries are lower than many other jobs,
such
as law, medicine and economics. What I mean is that they are not paid attention to by the authority greatly.
For instance
, in ,Kazakhstan a teacher with nine years of experience will be paid far less than a doctor with the same experience. The solution is for the government to increase their wage and as a ,result it would attract more individuals into the profession. Another
problem
is that many children do not behave well in class.
That is
to say, when
teachers
represent their projects, many youngsters do not respect and pay attention to them.
In addition
, it may lead
teachers
giving
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up teaching students. To tackle
this
problem
, parents ought to hand over their children a sense of respect for
teachers
, in order to make kids behave well in class. A third cause of
this
problem
is that
teachers
are given too much
work
to do. Most
teachers
have to do extra
work
,
such
as paperwork and marking learners at school or college, which means they have to stay late there and
work
at home in the evening.
As a result
, they are tired and stressed from submitting too
many
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work
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and their job has a negative impact on family life. To solve
this
problem
is that there should be teaching assistants, which would make
teachers
'
work
effortless.
To conclude
, teaching is becoming less popular in many countries,
due to
reasons
such
as salary, working hours and people’s behaviour.
This
is a serious
problem
, and unless there can get more talented people
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become
teachers
. In my opinion, tackling
this
problem
lies with parents and the government.
Submitted by 29th of april on

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