The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
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The line chart illustrates the average
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dioxide
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emissions
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of each person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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, the four countries experienced different trends in the time period.
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the
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of Italy and Portugal rose steadily , the
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in UK and Sweden fell over time. As the graph shows , Uk's
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figure started at 11 metric
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followed by a slightly declined to around 8,3 metric
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between the time period 1967 and 2007. Regarding Sweden's
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, in 1977
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emissions
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of
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reached 10,1 metric
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.
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figure rapidly dropped until 1987
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this
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action the inde significantly plummet till 2007.
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, the
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of
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of
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in Italy started from 4 metric
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in 1967 and sharply rose in 1977 . But later the growing rate of speed collapsed until 1997
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experienced a levelling off during the period of 10 years , so the final
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finished at 6,9 metric
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. If we come to the Portugalian figures our
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gradually climbed from 1967 to 1987 followed by rapidly jumping over 10 years , afterwards the
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slowly grew until 2007 .
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