In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With the development of
tecnology
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technology
and
eletronic
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electronic
devices,online reading becomes more and more popular in modern societies. For
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phenomenon, some
people
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hold the view that there will be no
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of printed newspapers or
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and everyone will read e-
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for free
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. As far as
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, a large group of
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will choose
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in the future,
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,
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believe that there will
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be some
people
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who will not forgive reading printed
books
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. undoubtedly, compared to printed newspapers and
books
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,reading e-
books
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has a lot of advantages which makes a number of
people
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would like to follow it.
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, it is more convenient to read articles online with the reading applications in our smartphones and
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Kindles
which are very portable.
People
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can read everything they want with their electronic devices anywhere
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of bringing a heavy book in their bag. What is more, online reading can
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save a lot of money. Most of the reading websites are all for free, so
people
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can
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novels and news without paying a huge of money.
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, more and more young
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with insufficient money prefer to read online than read printed
books
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.
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,
this
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does not automatically mean that nobody will purchase
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and
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newspapers
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physical stores. After all, online reading still has its drawbacks.
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,
people
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usually find it difficult to highlight sentences and take notes when they
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online.
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reason, buying printed
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and newspapers will
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the future. With these printed publications, readers' ideas and opinions can be written down on the margin of the book, which will
privide
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provide
them a sense of achievement during their reading time. In conclusion,
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there will be more
people
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who prefer reading online, it is very possible that a group of
people
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who enjoy reading in
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way will still choose these physical publications.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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