Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?

It is inevitably true that there is an inexorable increase /surge in the usage of

machines

with AI technology /

machines

controlled by

robots

for doing

work

both at home and workplace. There is enough compelling evidence to argue that

this

adverse trend brings with it

deluge

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of demerits. (Strong negative opinion statement)

This

essay argues how excessive use of robot

enables

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machines

could push

people

to live sedentary

lifestyle

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and why human labor would lose its value over time. For a start, /For one thing, (sequencing linker) what is more worrisome/ a far more serious concern is that with the growing dependency on

machines

with AI technology,

people

have not only become lazy as most of the

work

is getting done by pressing few buttons

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but

also

fallen prey to critical illnesses,

such

as obesity, increased cardiac ailments

due to

lack of physical movement. Recent reports claim that there is a substantial increase in the number of patients who complain of accumulation of fat

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surge

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the surge

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in blood cholesterol in hospitals in the cities where

people

use

machines

for doing household chores as opposed to

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in rural areas where

people

still do

work

manually which in turn reduces their potential risk of falling ill.

Nevertheless

, /

Nonetheless

, /

However

, doing

work

manually both in the house and at

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workplace could help reduce the irreversible damage done to

body

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and mind

due to

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle. /

Nevertheless

, /

Nonetheless

, /

However

, doing

work

manually could entail movement of

body

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,

release

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of toxins in the form of sweat, thereby improving the state of health and

wellbeing

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.

Besides

this

, /Alongside

this

, what is more worrisome, /a far more serious concern is that in factories, laboratories and in mechanical sectors there are lots of contemporary

machines

which adversely affects the employment rate of

people

which is an alarming concern for

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.

Machines

are replacing human

labor

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, thereby increasing

the

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acute unemployment among

people

.

In other words

, given that

robots

neither produce errors nor consume a lot of time, doing repetitive

work

effectively and efficiently, and

therefore

could be trusted more by the companies which find it quite costly to hire human

labor

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which could hardly match the speed and accuracy of

machines

. Future technologies

such

as artificial intelligence

is

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capable of creating

robots

smarter than humans, which could endanger mankind and other lives on earth.

However

, without humans, controlling

robots

or reprogramming them during faults could be difficult. /

However

, if there is unemployment

then

people

would resort to illegal ways of earning money which in turn could increase the crime rate of the city.

To conclude

, it is completely justifiable to say that

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of

robots

for carrying out

work

at home or office could be detrimental /could result in deterioration of health

as well as

loss of jobs of skilled workforce.