there seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both the sides.

There is an upward slope for criminals performing serious crimes

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. There is

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enough compelling evidence

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argue that

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serious

law breakers

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but

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be liable for punitive measures.

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essay describes both the views of the phases and some provocative actions. For a start, what is more worrisome in today’s

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life is there is a surge in

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of serious crimes like murderers,

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people

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be penalized with death retribution.

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is because they believe that

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assassinating the perpetrators of

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acts,

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will serve lesson to the masses and

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make them desist from

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actions.

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could be exemplified, that the rate of

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committed in China is very low and

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can be attributed to the fact that any person in the nation

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guilty of an offence is

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by hanging. As

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, they think that

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wrong doers

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will make

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desist from behaving unlawful manner. Alongside

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, some group of people feels that law offenders like theft, terrorists and gangster should have strict action against unlawful

crime

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, victims should

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or sentenced

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prisionment

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prison

or should be charged with levy heavy fine by selling their properties or assets.

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creates

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to the people committing

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and to the society.

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some steps like these would lead

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to neither execute

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again

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to unbreak the law. In conclusion,

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criminals

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with repetitive

crime

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should never ever get bail from

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or break free from jail.

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, serious life

killer

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killers

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should be sentenced to be hanged as

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retribution.