Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowaday

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, the environmental

problem

has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention

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the public. Some people believe that the key environmental

problem

of our era is the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

,

while

others argue that there are more essential environmental

problems

. In my eyes, I hold the view of the latter

one

.

Firstly

, it has been argued why I think there are more essential environmental

problems

. Admittedly, the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

is

one

part of environmental

problems

.

For example

,

one

well-known biologist, Lucy Blair

said''With

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said with

the increasing demand

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constructive building and training, governments are exploring more and more natural land into useful ones for humans. Absolutely, it damages deeply the inhabitant of

plants

and

animals

'' It is

thus

clearly shown that the key environmental

problem

includes the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

.

Moreover

, I still reckon there are more essential environmental

problems

. As far as the environment

isconcerned

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is concerned

, the ultimate aim of the environment is to make our earth

harmony

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and peaceful.

For instance

,

one

recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that air pollution

also

causes

enviromental

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environmental

problem

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, which makes our environment worse to survive.

Besides

,

the

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climate change is

also

part of

environmental

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the environmental

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problem

. As we can see, the sea level is higher and higher these years.

In addition

,

environmental

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the environmental

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problem

is

also

strongly linked to the disasters like flooding and drought.

Therefore

, there is no doubt that there are more essential environmental

problems

.

To sum up

, I believe that there are more essential environmental

problems

due to

the reasons outlined above. In order to address

this

issue, the government and people should make a concerted effort to find a solution.