Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the television shows aired during the day hours on your

channel

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StarPlus. I am a prime subscriber to the

channel

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however

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, I am very disappointed by the dry shows available to watch. The programs usually telecasted between 11am to 4 pm on StartPlus are mostly cooking shows and overly dramatic soap operas. These shows are repeated over and over, and

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, it is extremely boring for the audience to stay on the

channel

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This

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is the time of the day when children like to enjoy television time after coming back from school,

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, neither the parents,

not

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nor

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the kids want to watch them. I would highly recommend

to consider

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considering

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airing

travel related

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travel-related

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shows, and programs that impart knowledge to young ones,

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as documentaries from

animal

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the animal

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planet. As the cricket World Cup season is around the corner, you could

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schedule

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apply

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cricket matches

which

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that

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the families can enjoy together. Hope these suggestions would help you bring

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apply

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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