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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Transport is the Backbone of any nation. Citizens used subways and highways for their import and export of goods
as well as
, for their commute.
Therefore
, many
people
 argue that government should invest money in
railways
 it is cheaper than any other public transport
while
 others believe the administration should spend on highways . From my perspective, it is better to spend money on the rail lines. I will articulate my pinpoints in a forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, in terms of those who believed that line should be constructed more because subways have cheaper tickets and a middle-class to high-class family easily afford it. And travelling from one area of the country to any other in less amount.
However
, tracks carry
a
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huge
numbers
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 of passengers at a time and it eliminates the vehicles from the
roads
 when most
people
 travel by train.
While
 other groups of
people
 argue investment in
roads
 that
roads
 used for short commuting purposes like for workers and labours who stay at the same place and work. ,
,
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Secondly
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people
 can face less traffic congestion and reach their destination on time.
Due to
 bad conditions of ,
roads
people
 waste hours on the
roads
 and face many work problems and distribute their timetable In my opinion,
railways
 cause less pollution in the environment because when most humankind use
railways
 for travelling purposes they eliminate the auto vehicle on
roads
 that discharge contaminated smoke and pollute the environment and lead to chronic and acute diseases. In conclusion,
government
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 investment in schools in public but they should spend on
railways
 and
roads
 because both are used for travelling and nowadays, dwellers faced many problems
due to
 environmental issues
as well as
, congestion of traffic.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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