The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
noodles
. Overall
, it has 8 stages, beginning with delivery
of flour and ending with Add an article
the delivery
Add an article
the labeling
labeling
of Change the spelling
labelling
noodles
. It is should be emphasized that the noodles
have five ingredients.
First of all, the flour is transformed from storage silos by a truck to the producing machines. Then
, the flour goes through a mixer where it is added with water and oil. This
process of the
mixing ends with the rolling of dough sheets. After that, these sheets Correct article usage
apply
is
cut into dough strips which are formed into Change the verb form
are
noodles
disks then
. Next,
the circle noodles
is
cooked in oil and dried. The whole process goes through rollers.
The Change the verb form
are
last
two steps consist of packing the prepared noodles
. Vegetables and spices are added to the noodles
and then
it
puts in cups. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Finally
, the cups are labeled
and sealed and in the end are ready for sale.Change the spelling
labelled
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