Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter - suggest how you could help her in her home - say why you would like to do this work - explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing in response to your advertisement for a candidate to help your home for

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limited hours a day next summer. I am confident that I would be an excellent candidate for

this

position, given my experience.

Firstly

, I will help you

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all

house related

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works

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like organising

the

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things, cleaning the floor and windows, and making

a food

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. I am a non-working person and I spend almost all

time

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in my house

to do

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such

kind

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works

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. I usually go to my

customers

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home

for

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to make

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lunch and

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clean their

house

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. I might

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suitable

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person for you because I know

English

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language very well.

Secondly

, I am eager to take on

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job because I am passionate about doing homework and excited to help

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you.

Moreover

, I am fascinated to work with international families as they are so

kindly

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in nature and very talented. So, I might

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learn something from you.

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, as I am going to another place in

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day, I will be available in the evening from 5:00 PM to 7:00 PM.

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, I will not available on Sunday whole day as I need to spend time with my child. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Milav Soni

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

227 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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