The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph represents the average level of illiteracy among
women
and men
worldwide last
year.
According to
the chart, the lowest level of inability to read and write is indicated in the developed countries with only 1% of men
and 2% of women
. Whereas
the highest number of illiteracy is in South Asia, where almost the majority of females are uneducated (more than 55%) and about a third of males which accounted for 33%.
On the other hand
, the lowest gap between men
and women
is in developed countries and Latin America, where female illiteracy rates are 1 and 2% higher respectively compared to males. The biggest distance between women
and men
in educational injustice could be seen in four out of six regions given in the bar chart. There are East Asia, Sub-Saharan, Arab States and South Asia.
Overall
, last
year's figures constitute that women
are more uneducated than men
in all regions worldwide.Submitted by kuralay.abylgazina on
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