Some people believe the daily
use
of
computers
has positive effects on
children
,
while
others disagree about that. In my
there
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more negative effects,
this
is
due to
the fact that they will spend too much
time
playing games and
this
may
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health
problems
.
Although
computers
could be a really good tool,
such
as searching for information, it is
also
used for
children
to play different
computer
games, spending the whole day isolated
instead
of socialising with friends and relatives, leading
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a lack of communication skills.
Moreover
spending too much
time
using the
computer
makes them not have enough
time
to study and fulfil
from school.
For instance
, my cousin has really bad marks at high school, that happens because he always prefers to play
computer
games rather than study.
On the other hand
, the excessive
use
of
computers
can lead to different health
problems
.
This
definitely causes on
children
by eye fatigue and really strong headaches. Doctors prove after an exhaustive year of examinations that one of the reasons why
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the excessive
use
of
computers
. A good example of
this
is the famous singer, Lola Palo. She told in a tv program that her vision
problems
started when she was a child and
use
to spend long nights on the
computer
.
Moreover
, not only can cause vision
problems
and headaches but
also
it is really hard to keep the right posture
while
we are seating using the
computer
.
To conclude
, even though the
computer
could be something really useful for
children
, they should take to do not spend too much
time
using it every day so they can avoid communication and health
problems
, and by the
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better performance at school. Balance is really important in life.