Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe the daily

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has positive effects on

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others disagree about that. In my

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much

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more negative effects,

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is

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the fact that they will spend too much

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playing games and

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may

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on

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health

problems

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computers

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could be a really good tool,

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as searching for information, it is

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used for

children

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to play different

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games, spending the whole day isolated

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of socialising with friends and relatives, leading

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a lack of communication skills.

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spending too much

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using the

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makes them not have enough

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to study and fulfil

homeworks

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homework

from school.

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, my cousin has really bad marks at high school, that happens because he always prefers to play

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games rather than study.

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, the excessive

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of

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can lead to different health

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definitely causes on

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by eye fatigue and really strong headaches. Doctors prove after an exhaustive year of examinations that one of the reasons why

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need glasses is

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the excessive

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of

computers

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. A good example of

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is the famous singer, Lola Palo. She told in a tv program that her vision

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started when she was a child and

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to spend long nights on the

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, not only can cause vision

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and headaches but

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it is really hard to keep the right posture

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we are seating using the

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, even though the

computer

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could be something really useful for

children

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, they should take to do not spend too much

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using it every day so they can avoid communication and health

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, and by the

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achieve

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better performance at school. Balance is really important in life.