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Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #universities #numbers #policy
The graph represents
population
 growth from the
year
 2000 to the
year
 2050 in
India
 and
China
. Based on the graph
India
's
population
 starts from 1,000(
billions
) in the
year
 2000
whereas
China
population
 starts from 1,250(
billions
) in
year
 2000.
India
population
 dramatically increased from 1,000(
billion
) till 1,600(
billions
) from the
year
 2,000 to the
year
 2050.
China
's
population
 and
India
's
population
 of 1,450 (
billion
) points meet in the
year
 2033.
Although
China
's
population
 is significantly higher than
India
's at the beginning after the
population
 the peak at 1,450(
billion
) it gradually fall to 1,390 (
billion
)in the
year
 2050. To be summarized
India
's
population
 are increasing to 1,600 (
Billions
) over 50 years,
nevertheless
China
's
population
 has
stable
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 and maintain between1,400 (
Billions
) and 1,500 (
Billions
) over the years 2018 to the
year
 2050. There has been a
further
 decrease after the
year
 2050. even though
China
 the
population
 is higher than
India
initially
 the
population
 has been controlled and upheld compared to
India
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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