The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar chart gives information about the percentage of Australians who bought
coffee
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or went to a
coffee
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shop in the
last
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four
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weeks
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in five different cities.
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,
it is clear that
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Australians prefer to purchase and consume instant
coffee
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rather than fresh
coffee
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across
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the
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board, and a majority of Melbourne and Hobart residents visited a
coffee
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shop over the
last
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four
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weeks
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. In terms of fresh
coffee
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, almost 45% of people in Sydney purchased some,
while
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just under 35% of Brisbane and Adelaide residents did so in the
last
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four
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weeks
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. Turning back to instant
coffee
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, it was purchased by around 55% of people in both Brisbane and Hobart. The figures for instant
coffee
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in the rest of the Australian cities were slightly lower, falling between 45% and 50%. In the
last
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four
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weeks
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, over 60% of people in Sydney, Hobart, and Melbourne went to a
coffee
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shop.
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, roughly 50% of Adelaide and 55% of Brisbane residents, respectively, visited a cafe in that same timeframe.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, four, weeks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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