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How should we ensure that television is a positive influence in the life of children?

#television #influence #life #children
Television
 is a part of
everydays
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everyday
life
 and most
children
 watch programs regularly. Many people agree that
children
 if
they
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apply
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watch
much
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a lot of
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television
 it can have
determental
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detrimental
 effects on
children
, especially their eyes.
Moreover
, we should control the way
children
 watch
TV
 to make sure it is not
harming
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harmful
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. I introduce two
measurments
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measurements
measures
 to ensure that
television
 has
positive
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a positive
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 influence
in
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on
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 the
life
 of
children
.
Firstly
, parents should have
a
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apply
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control
on
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over
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 the type of
programmes
 that
children
 watch.
In addition
, they should warrant
that
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apply
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which program is appropriate for their child.
For example
, there are many cartoons which
is
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are
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 educational and
also
 work as a huge box of information and words for
children
 that can be beneficial for their
life
.
Secondly
,
TV
 companies should set
a
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an
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 appropriate time for playing horror movies.
For example
, there should be some protection so that during the afternoon and the evening only suitable
programmes
 are available.
This
 is another protection for the
childrens
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children
children's
life
.
Furthermore
 , it is important to set a limitation for the amount of time spent watching
television
. If
children
 spend too much time in front of the
TV
 , it can be harmful
for
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to
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 their physical and mental health.
TV
 should be part of a whole range of activities for
children
. If
children
 do sports, have other hobbies and go out with their friends
then
TV
 is a nice relaxing activity for them. It can be a positive influence.
Finally
 ,
TV
 can be great in
help
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helping
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children
 to make friends because most kids watch
television
 which
give
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gives
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 them something to talk about. If they have
a
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the
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 same taste in cartoons or
children
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children's
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programmes
, they will be able to discuss it and find something in common. To sum,
television
 can be a very positive influence
for
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on
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children
. If parents control
duration
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the duration
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 of the
childrens
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children
children's
 watch and the type of
programmes
, it can be a good part of their lives.
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