Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Several dangerous
activities
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are popular because of many factors. In
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extreme
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activities
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addicted
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will be outlined in detail before the conclusion is reached. It is undeniable that some
people
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want to be in
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spotlight. Dangerous activity is one of
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video content creation which can gain
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attention especially when they were publishing through social media
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as Facebook, Youtube and Instagram. When comparing adventurous sports
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with normal sport playing videos, it is obvious that the former kind of sport usually got more viewers and like counts. Because of the trilling mood viewers got
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watching. In fact that extreme sports make sportsmen feel happy and addicted
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of the Dopamine hormone
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rushing at a high level
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they are playing dangerous sports.
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kind of hormone is the main source of building up
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's happy moods. In case
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some
people
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are attracted to extreme
activities
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. In conclusion,
people
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are into adventurous
activities
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because
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creating
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kind of video content can reach
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well-known
people
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. Another reason is they could light up
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's moods.
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