Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Several dangerous
activities
are popular because of many factors. In the
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activities
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activity
addicted
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It is undeniable that some Replace the word
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people
want to be in a
spotlight. Dangerous activity is one of Correct article usage
the
interesting
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the interesting
people
attention especially when they were publishing through social media Change noun form
people's
such
as Facebook, Youtube and Instagram. When comparing adventurous sports video
with normal sport playing videos, it is obvious that the former kind of sport usually got more viewers and like counts. Because of the trilling mood viewers got Fix the agreement mistake
videos
while
watching.
In fact that extreme sports make sportsmen feel happy and addicted as a result
of the Dopamine hormone is
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while
they are playing dangerous sports. This
kind of hormone is the main source of building up people
's happy moods. In case that
some Correct word choice
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people
are attracted to extreme activities
.
In conclusion, people
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people
. Another reason is they could light up people
's moods.Submitted by mill-tin on
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