The plans below show the layout of a university sports’s centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summrize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the developments which will take place in the university's
sports
centre at present and in the future. Comparing the two plans reveals a complete transformation from a simple
sports
centre into a modern one with many new facilities. The most noticeable is that the outdoor courts on the west
side
will be demolished to make a new leisure pool.
Furthermore
, it will be a
sports
shop and a new changing room on the south
side
next to the reception.
In contrast
, the outdoor courts on the east
side
will change to a
sports
hall and increase the gym area.
In addition
, dance studios will be established on the east
side
in front of the
sports
hall and make a new changing room and cafe on the south
side
next to the main gate.
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