The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates
pupils
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pupils'
pupil's
travel
types to and from the school. Moreover
, she is
clearly Unnecessary verb
apply
show
the changes Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
among
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in
usage
of different modes of transport in 1990 and after 20 years.
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the usage
According to
the bar chart, we see, that the biggest changes were at
the two different modes of Change preposition
in
travel
. First
type is Change the article
The first
vehicle
, at the beginning usage amounts Add an article
a vehicle
the vehicle
only
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to only
millions
per year, but Change preposition
to millions
since
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over
the
time, the index became three times higher. The second increased Correct article usage
apply
trips
rate was walking, which Change the noun form
trip
is
was about twelve Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
and through the decades decreased twice. The most lower index Change to singular
million
at
2010 was cycling and walking and bus, Change preposition
in
that is
also
decreased rates since 1990. We can see that almost stable remain the bus travel
type.
All in all, we can obviously see than
through the two decades, dramatically decrease Correct word choice
that
active
type of travelling to and from Change preposition
in active
the
school. And through the innovation, the most usable method became Correct article usage
apply
travel
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