You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

Dear Sir, The purpose of writing
this
letter to you is that I like the cooking
centre
that you lead and I wanted to make suggestions for the development of your cooking
centre
. I have been studying at your cooking
centre
for 3 months now. I learned a lot of cooking secrets during
this
time. I liked the teaching methods of the teachers in
this
school and their culture of interaction.
In addition
, I was surprised by the cooking skills of the teachers. I have learned about 20 cooking secrets since I came to the cooking class. The dishes I prepared through the cooking methods taught by the teachers turned out to be very tasty. My parents
also
liked the food I prepared. I
also
learned how to cook European food at
this
cooking
centre
. I have made about 10 European dishes so far. I would advise you to open courses in your culinary
centre
that teach how to prepare seafood. Because now the demand for seafood is increasing in the world. As everyone knows, there are many people who love seafood in the world. If you open
this
course in your cooking
centre
, your cooking
centre
will develop even more. Yours sincerely, Mr Bernard
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