You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1) What is the article about? 2) What is the error? 3) What you expect an editor to do?

Dear Sir, My name is Amandeep Singh and I am writing
this
letter in response to an article published by your company in Times of India recently. In the sports
section
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the name of our Cricket team captain was incorrectly mentioned. You mentioned
at
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the front page that Hardik Pandya is the Captain of the Indian Cricket Team. For your information, the Board of Cricket and Control in India has not yet finalized his name yet. Virat Kohli is still serving as the Captain and he has made clear that he has no plans of retirement yet. As a responsible citizen of India, I don't want our youngsters to get incorrect knowledge
therefore
I request you to publish an article
tommorow
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tomorrow
with the correct information. Yours sincerely, Amandeep Singh.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • newspaper
  • article
  • error
  • inaccurate
  • information
  • editor
  • corrections
  • evidence
  • rectify
  • accurate
  • reporting
  • future
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