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The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many foreign tourists a certain European got, and they visited three different regions, namely
mountains
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,
lakes
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 and coasts.
This
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 study was conducted during a period of two decades, commencing from 1987 to 2007. At first glance, it is recognizable that
overall
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, the coastline was the most popular among the visitors over
this
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 reporting period, but it gained some popularity over the years. looking at the chart in more detail,
it is clear that
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 the highest percentage of tourists went to the coast, with 40
thousand
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 in 1987, and it was followed by the
mountains
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 and the
lakes
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, which received only 20
thousand
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 and 10
thousand
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 respectively. In the following five years, there was an upward trend in explorers of both
mountains
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as well as
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lakes
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, and both figures were tied in 1992,
on the contrary
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, a slight decrease of 5
thousand
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 was noticed in the number of people visiting the coast.
However
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,
this
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 number dramatically climbed up after a decade and a half, and it reached more than 70
thousand
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.
In addition
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, both figures for mountainous areas and
lakes
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 mimicked the same movement during the same phase, but there was a fluctuation in the rate of people who discovered the latter until it peaked at 50
thousand
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 in 2007. At the same time, the proportion of humans who headed to the
mountains
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 rose gradually by 15
thousand
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words mountains, lakes, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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